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    • Differences between the city I was born an the city I live.

    • Hi everybody, I'm Lucas, a lawyer from Brazil.
    • I was born in a city called Salvador, member state of Bahia, but now I live in Brasília, the capital of my country since 1960.
  • There are a lot of differences between Salvador and Brasília.
  • Salvador is an historical city, the first capital of Brazil, and was founded in 1549.
    • There is an atmosphere of old traditions with strong blending of portuguese and african heritage.
    • In fact, Salvador remembers New Orleans in the USA, including the social problems and the taste for okra - basis of the "carurú" plate (here an recipe http://flavorsofbrazil.blogspot.com.br/2009/10/recipe-caruru.html?m=1).
    • The other famous dish is the acarajé that resembles falafel because of the islamic descent of the slaves.
    • After 1835 the islamics were executed, and today the religion is an mixture of catholicism and african elements, that origined the "candomblé" (here in wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Candomblé).
    • People in Bahia are very effusive, always happy, despite the problems.
    • Otherwise, Brasília is an planned city, build for administrative puporses betwen 1955 and 1960.
    • Acording to the major architect, Oscar Niemeyer, "You will see the palaces of Brasilia, may like them or not, but never say they have seen something similar before." Brasília is part of World Heritage: http://whc.unesco.org/en/list/445.
    • The population, in the majority, works for Governement, are of public servants (including me, although I also practice law for individuals, if there is no conflicts of interest).
    • Brasília is very clean, monumental and organized, people are very reserved.
    • The "city of the power".
  • It resembles Washington. That's it.
    • I would appreciate the corrections.
  • Sincerely, Lucas

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    • I was born in a city called Salvador, member state of Bahia, but now I live in Brasília, the capital of my country since 1960.
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    • I was born in a city called Salvador, a member state of Bahia, butand now I live in Brasília, the capital of my country since 1960.
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    • I was born in a city called Salvador, memberwithin the state of Bahia, but now I live in Brasília, the capital of my country since 1960.
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    • There is an atmosphere of old traditions with strong blending of portuguese and african heritage.
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    • There is an atmosphere of old traditions with a strong blending of pPortuguese and aAfrican heritage.
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    • There is an atmosphere of old traditions with strong blending of pIt is very traditional and incorporates both Portuguese and aAfrican heritage.
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    • In fact, Salvador remembers New Orleans in the USA, including the social problems and the taste for okra - basis of the "carurú" plate (here an recipe http://flavorsofbrazil.blogspot.com.br/2009/10/recipe-caruru.html?m=1).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In fact, Salvador remsemblers New Orleans in the USA, including the social problems and the taste for okra -, the basis of the "carurú" platedish. (hHere is an recipe http://flavorsofbrazil.blogspot.com.br/2009/10/recipe-caruru.html?m=1).
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    • The other famous dish is the acarajé that resembles falafel because of the islamic descent of the slaves.
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    • The Another famous dish is the acarajé that, which resembles falafel. because of the iIslamic descent of the slaves.
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    • The other famous dish is the acarajé thatwhich resembles falafel because of the islamic descent of the slaves.
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    • After 1835 the islamics were executed, and today the religion is an mixture of catholicism and african elements, that origined the "candomblé" (here in wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Candomblé).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After 1835, the islamicMuslims were executed, and today the religion is an mixture of cCatholicism and aAfrican elements, that originedated in the "candomblé" (here in wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Candomblé).
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    • Acording to the major architect, Oscar Niemeyer, "You will see the palaces of Brasilia, may like them or not, but never say they have seen something similar before." Brasília is part of World Heritage: http://whc.unesco.org/en/list/445.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • According to the major architect, Oscar Niemeyer, "You will see the palaces of Brasilia, may like them or not, but never say they have seen something similar before." Brasília is part of World Heritage: http://whc.unesco.org/en/list/445.
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    • The population, in the majority, works for Governement, are of public servants (including me, although I also practice law for individuals, if there is no conflicts of interest).
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    • The population, in the majority,majority of the population works for Gthe governement, and are of public servants (including me, although I also practice law for individuals, if there is no conflicts of interest).
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    • The population, in the majority, works for the Governement, and are of public servants. (including meMyself included, although I also practice law for individuals, ifas long as there is no conflicts of interest).
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