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  • Letter to a tourist agency

    • Dear managers of Adventure Weekend I'm writing in connection with your offer to organize holiday for a group of people.
    • According to your advertisement I've described the features of my group below: - it consists of seven people aged from 23 to 28 years; there are five men in the group and two girls; - we are interested in spending 6-day weekend filled with light sport activities, e. g. walking or swimming.
    • But our group has already taken part in weekends organized in such ways and all we want to try something brand new and impressive; - people in the group have different level of fitness, but all of them are quite healthy and hardy (for instance, each of us can walk all day long with 15-kilos backpack).
  • I want to make clear some points in your offer: - first and foremost we want to find out - can you organize canoeing for our group?
  • - if so, what skills and experience are needed for this kind of activity?
  • - in your ad you mentioned that all we need to bring on holiday is special clothes.
    • If we are going to spend 6 days canoeing, what type of outfit should be brought?
    • - how much will cost such kind of trip and what exactly will be included in the proposition?
  • Will food be included?
    • Thank you in advance, I'm looking forward to your answer!
  • Best wishes, Alice Kuleshova

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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  • câu 1
    • Dear managers of Adventure Weekend I'm writing in connection with your offer to organize holiday for a group of people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Dear managers of Adventure Weekend,¶ I'm writing in connection withabout your offer to organize a holiday for a group of people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • According to your advertisement I've described the features of my group below: - it consists of seven people aged from 23 to 28 years; there are five men in the group and two girls; - we are interested in spending 6-day weekend filled with light sport activities, e. g. walking or swimming.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • As according to your advertisement, I've described the features of my group below:¶- it consists of seven people aged from 23 to 28 years; there are five men in the group and two girlswomen;¶- we are interested in spending 6- day weekend filled withs doing light sporty activities, e. g. walking or swimming.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • But our group has already taken part in weekends organized in such ways and all we want to try something brand new and impressive; - people in the group have different level of fitness, but all of them are quite healthy and hardy (for instance, each of us can walk all day long with 15-kilos backpack).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But our group has already taken part in weekends organized in such ways and allthese types of weekends before, so we want to try something brand new and impressive;¶- the people in the group have different levels of fitness, but all of them arewe are all quite healthy and hardy (for instance, each of us can walk all day long with 15-kilos backpacks).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • I want to make clear some points in your offer: - first and foremost we want to find out - can you organize canoeing for our group?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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