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Text from seesaws0 - English

  • About my experience in Boston + alpha

    • I'd like to continue talking about the experience of New Year's day in Boston.
    • In fact, there's a lot of similarity between Tokyo and Boston. 1.
    • Both of them has a great public transportation... Subway. (or Metro?
  • What is the difference?) Here in CA, we can't live without driving a car.
    • Everything spread out and it's really inconvenient.
  • I wish I could go to LA more easily. 2. The smell! I'm serious.
    • I felt a scent of winter there, which I can't feel at the west coast.
    • Probably that is because it is not as cold as Boston lol Anyway, that reminded me of Tokyo and to be honest I was almost crying from the nostalgia. 3.
  • Broadness of sidewalk.
  • That must be related to 1.
  • There were many pedestrian until midnight.
    • I think that is the symbol of the safety of the city...
    • I mean, except really suburb area :p Well, that's the general impression I had about Boston.
  • About the day, I went to see the fireworks with my friend.
  • The view from Boston Common was awesome!
  • I confess here that I had underestimated the quality of fireworks in the US till then lol Then we grabbed a fried dough, which tasted like Agepan in Japan, before going back my friend's home.
    • Then we ate hot soba noodle as a custom of New Year's eve in Japan.
  • It means to live "thin(not outstanding) but longer" life.
    • I'd like to know much about the custom in New Year's day in other countries :) By the way, hereby I swear I will continue writing something here at least 1 month.
    • Is it abruptly?
  • Just because I can't stick to anything without swearing in front of someone.
  • Ahhh it's tough work for me to write such a long article in English! Bye then!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English