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Hello,
My name is Liudmila, I'm from Russia and right now I'm working on my pronunciation in german.
I would like to ask you for your assistance. Could you check whether I pronounce all the sounds correctly and give me WRITTEN recommendations on how to improve my pronunciation.

I do not speak English and I'm just a beginner in german, so it will be quite a challenge for me to communicate with you :) and that's why I'm writing this letter.
I will send you a text and I will read it to you during our skype session. Please, write down all my strong and weak points in pronunciation at the end of our lesson and send them to our chat in Skype, so I could analyze and practice them later.
Thanks a lot!