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In the night he heard the sound of empty hearts. You will never forget that there is a person whose heart is a void you never fill. His wound so deep that it's easier to just go away. But...Don't leave me, don't leave, tell others. In fact the most important thing in your life is to be humane. But all your life you're the one. Ideal of such people is loneliness then don't go into their lives. Let them be alone.Get out, get out. Loneliness is not always bad, for some it's a soothing the soul, for some it's a hermit. If anyone say that this is nonsense, I would argue the opposite. 

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Ben_Grzyb profile picture Ben_GrzybAugust 2017
"In fact the most important be humane in your life." Instead say, "In fact the most important thing is to be humane in your life." But saying, "In fact the most important thing in your life is to be humane." Sounds the most natural.
Ben_Grzyb profile picture Ben_GrzybAugust 2017
Don't leave tell others. Punctuation is important, I think what you mean is, "Don't leave, tell others." The comma ( , ) separates the two phrases.
masih_joza profile picture masih_jozaAugust 2017
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