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Place where I live

I would like to tell you about the place where I live. Actually I live in the city centre. It's not so good as it seems. The windows of my apartment are above a very busy street. You might think that it's very noisy. Yes, it is. When my windows are opened there is a lot of noise inside my rooms. Sometimes it drives me crazy because it's so annoying and when I need to concentrate I can't. The street is really very crowded with a lot of driving cars. Time to time in my dreams I would rather live in a less noisy place, but in the other side I really love this place where I live because I was born and grew here. 

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exRanger profile picture exRangerApril 2020
@Косичка:

Your bried essay is in fact very good. Молодец!

I suggest only a few VERY minor wording changes:

First: "The street is really very crowded with lots of traffic."
Second: "From time to time I dream of living in a less noisy place, but then I think about how much I love this place, where I was born and grew up."
vincent profile picture vincentApril 2020
Hi Kosichka, if you want to write an essay, others will help you more easily if you create your essay in the CORRECTION section
joseavila10 profile picture joseavila10April 2020
You could write "it's not as good as it seems"
And "with a lot of cars passing by"