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100% GOOD (2 votes)beantwoordTaalvraag
Please, check my short essay

Hi,

I am really sorry for my absence. I have some problems with my back (back pain). About 5 years ago, I went with my family to a roller rink. We enjoyed our time, but, at the end, I suddenly felt down and couldn’t stand up. I left a roller rink on all fours. Then I spent all day at home with my back pain and didn’t go to a hospital. I thought that my heathy would be well and it was the simple contusion. But I was wrong. Next morning I woke up and didn’t feel my left leg. Then I came to my sense and decided to go to the hospital. Paramedics saved my leg.

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vincent profile picture vincentOctober 2017
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dewijones profile picture dewijonesOctober 2017
I left THE roller rink on all fours
dewijones profile picture dewijonesOctober 2017
Couldn't feel my left leg
dewijones profile picture dewijonesOctober 2017
Your health cannot be well.
You can be well.
Markota profile picture MarkotaOctober 2017
I suddenly fell down.
Then i came to my senses.