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Text from vaness182 - English

  • December 27th.

  • Today is Friday, December 27th.
  • Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
    • Yesterday I can't remember that was happened, I was in house, after I saw myself in the hospital, I don't remeber anything, only I have a terrible ache on my muscles and my family worried for me.
    • In the night, ma copine, came home and she was seeing me and asked me all, how are you? and I said to her that I feel good, only was a fainting, the doctors gave me medecines and the best medicine is ma copine.
    • My brother got up me, pick up me to the bed, and call the ambulance, everybody was trying talk me and try to woke up me, but I coundn't.
  • Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
  • When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbors and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
  • I still without force, in the morning I've broken a cristal glas, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
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    • Yesterday I can't remember that was happened, I was in house, after I saw myself in the hospital, I don't remeber anything, only I have a terrible ache on my muscles and my family worried for me.
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    • Yesterday I can't remember twhat was happened yesterday, I was in the house, after I sawnd then somehow I find myself in thea hospital, I don't remeber anything, only bed and I have no recollection of how I get there, but I haved a terrible ache on my muscles pain and my family worried for me.
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    • In the night, ma copine, came home and she was seeing me and asked me all, how are you? and I said to her that I feel good, only was a fainting, the doctors gave me medecines and the best medicine is ma copine.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • In the night, ma copiney friend, came home and she was seeinglooking at me and asked me all, how are you? andhow I was? I said to her that I feelt good, only was a fainting, t and that I had only fainted. The doctors gave me medeicines and the best medicine is ma copiney friend.
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    • InLater theat night, ma copine,y sister came home, and she was seelooking at me and asked me all, how are you? and I saidbout my health condition and how I was? I told her that I feelt good, only was a fainting, t and I assured her that I had only fainted. The doctors gave me medeicines and, but for me the best medicine is ma copiney sister's love/hug.
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    • My brother got up me, pick up me to the bed, and call the ambulance, everybody was trying talk me and try to woke up me, but I coundn't.
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    • My brother got up me, pick uplifted me up and took me to the bed, and called the ambulance, e. Everybodyone was trying to talk me and tryI tried to woake up several time,s but, I cwoundn'tld not wake up.
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    • Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
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    • When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbors and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
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    • I still without force, in the morning I've broken a cristal glas, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.
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