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  • A very important formal letter

  • Dear Pr de Jong-van den Berg My name is Johann C.
    • I’m a pharmacist graduated in Colombia and I’m finishing my master’s degree in Public Health at Pierre et Marie Curie University in Paris, France.
  • I’m interested in pursuing a PhD in Public Health in autumn next year and I would really like to do it in cotutelle between France and the Netherlands (Groningen University) to get the valuable opportunity to learn from your experience.
  • My French these codirector (head of the Paris pharmacoepidemiology center) and I, are planning to submit a project to the national medicines regulatory agency in France (ANSM) to get a source of funding.
  • The main subject would be the safety monitoring of the off-label use of drugs but we are working in finding a more specific topic that must be defined really soon.
  • Thus, as I know you have a great expertise in pharmacoepidemiology, I’m politely asking you if you would be interested in being my these codirector in Groningen University.
  • I think this would be an amazing opportunity to create research links between these countries and to mutually learn from our experiences.
  • If so, I’ll be honored if you could take part of the project elaboration.
  • Yours sincerely, Johann Castaneda

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    • I’m a pharmacist graduated in Colombia and I’m finishing my master’s degree in Public Health at Pierre et Marie Curie University in Paris, France.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • I’m a pharmacist graduated in Colombia and I’m finishing my master’s degree in Public Health at "Pierre et Marie Curie University" in Paris, France.
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
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    • I’m interested in pursuing a PhD in Public Health in autumn next year and I would really like to do it in cotutelle between France and the Netherlands (Groningen University) to get the valuable opportunity to learn from your experience.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
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    • My French these codirector (head of the Paris pharmacoepidemiology center) and I, are planning to submit a project to the national medicines regulatory agency in France (ANSM) to get a source of funding.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
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    • The main subject would be the safety monitoring of the off-label use of drugs but we are working in finding a more specific topic that must be defined really soon.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
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    • Thus, as I know you have a great expertise in pharmacoepidemiology, I’m politely asking you if you would be interested in being my these codirector in Groningen University.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
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    • I think this would be an amazing opportunity to create research links between these countries and to mutually learn from our experiences.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
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