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  • A very important formal letter

  • Dear Pr de Jong-van den Berg My name is Johann C.
    • I’m a pharmacist graduated in Colombia and I’m finishing my master’s degree in Public Health at Pierre et Marie Curie University in Paris, France.
  • I’m interested in pursuing a PhD in Public Health in autumn next year and I would really like to do it in cotutelle between France and the Netherlands (Groningen University) to get the valuable opportunity to learn from your experience.
  • My French these codirector (head of the Paris pharmacoepidemiology center) and I, are planning to submit a project to the national medicines regulatory agency in France (ANSM) to get a source of funding.
  • The main subject would be the safety monitoring of the off-label use of drugs but we are working in finding a more specific topic that must be defined really soon.
  • Thus, as I know you have a great expertise in pharmacoepidemiology, I’m politely asking you if you would be interested in being my these codirector in Groningen University.
  • I think this would be an amazing opportunity to create research links between these countries and to mutually learn from our experiences.
  • If so, I’ll be honored if you could take part of the project elaboration.
  • Yours sincerely, Johann Castaneda

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    • I’m a pharmacist graduated in Colombia and I’m finishing my master’s degree in Public Health at Pierre et Marie Curie University in Paris, France.
      투표하세요!
    • I’m a pharmacist graduated in Colombia and I’m finishing my master’s degree in Public Health at "Pierre et Marie Curie University" in Paris, France.
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    • I’m interested in pursuing a PhD in Public Health in autumn next year and I would really like to do it in cotutelle between France and the Netherlands (Groningen University) to get the valuable opportunity to learn from your experience.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • My French these codirector (head of the Paris pharmacoepidemiology center) and I, are planning to submit a project to the national medicines regulatory agency in France (ANSM) to get a source of funding.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • The main subject would be the safety monitoring of the off-label use of drugs but we are working in finding a more specific topic that must be defined really soon.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • Thus, as I know you have a great expertise in pharmacoepidemiology, I’m politely asking you if you would be interested in being my these codirector in Groningen University.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
    • I think this would be an amazing opportunity to create research links between these countries and to mutually learn from our experiences.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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