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  • What can be done for a global protection of the environment while considering the interests of industrial, emerging or developing countries?
  • We have to face some advantages and disadvantages by protecting our environment globally.
  • We could reduce harvesting sweet corn in Germany for the production of renewable energy on an ineffective way.
  • As an advantage out of this, we would manage to feed poorer countries with these savings.
  • Moreover, clothing companies such as H & M and Zara could take better care at working environments in the first place of their supplier chain.
  • By paying a premium, the workers of the suppliers in Bangladesh would not need to deal with unhealthy chemicals for processing clothes no more nor working long hours.
  • But we should also consider, driving rather cars with electronic engine than cars with gas engine.
  • As a disadvantage, stronger laws would be needed to get a balance between a country’s economic interest and protecting the environment.
  • By switching to electronic vehicles, the price for gas would rise.
  • It should be said, that the protection of our mother earth is more than just considering the interests of industrial or developing countries.
  • It is more than an annual environmental meeting, which took place in Poland’s capital a few weeks ago.
  • I think we have to do more for the protection of our environment by electric savings for instance.
  • We should not consider the interest of any country.
  • The earth is still our place to live where need to take care of to be safe and with a healthy environment.

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