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Teks daripada Lamolly - English

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The text
- My text.
- Today is 13th Desember.
- I want to read a English book. It is snow. It's cool.
- I got for a walk.
- I shall want to icerink, but I'm ill.
- Soon I'll go to icerink.

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- The text
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- My text.
  Undi sekarang!
- My text.Aujourd'hui,c'est le 13 décembre,je veux lire un livre en anglais.Il y a la neige,c'est cool.Je suis pour une promenade.Je ne manquerai de patiner,mais je suis malade.Bientôt,je vais aller patiner.
  margely Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- Today is 13th Desember.
  Undi sekarang!
- Today ist is the 13th of Descember.
  Riden66 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I want to read a English book. It is snow. It's cool.
  Undi sekarang!
- I want to read an English book. It is snowing. It's cool.
  Riden66 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I got for a walk.
  Undi sekarang!
- I ~~got~~am going for a walk.
  Riden66 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- I shall want to icerink, but I'm ill.
  Undi sekarang!
- I ~~shall~~ want to go to the icerink, but I'm ill.
  Riden66 Ulasan
  
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- I ~~shall~~ want to go to the ice rink, but I'm ill.
  Sherman1865 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
Ayat 6
- Soon I'll go to icerink.
  Undi sekarang!
- Soon I'll go to the icerink.
  Riden66 Ulasan
  
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- Soon I'll go to ice rink.
  Sherman1865 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6