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- Hi Romny, a simple message to tell you I bought my plane tickets yesterday, my deparditure is Saturday 18th of January at 2 PM and I arrive at DURBAN airport Sunday 19th of January at 11H35 AM.
- I very pressed to arrive, see you later, Cyrille

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- Hi Romny, a simple message to tell you I bought my plane tickets yesterday, my deparditure is Saturday 18th of January at 2 PM and I arrive at DURBAN airport Sunday 19th of January at 11H35 AM.
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- Hi Romny, a simple message to tell you Ithat i bought my plane tickets yesterday, my deparditure is on Saturday 18th of January at 2 PM and Ii'll arrive at DURBAN airport on Sunday 19th of January at 11H35 AM.
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- Hi Romny, ¶This is a simple message to tell you I bought my plane tickets yesterday~~, m~~. My deparditure is Saturday 18th of January at 2 PM and I arrive at DURBAN airport Sunday 19th of January at 11H:35 AM.
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- I very pressed to arrive, see you later, Cyrille
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- I'm very impressed to arrive, see you later, Cyrille
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- I am very pressed to arrive~~, s~~.¶¶See you later, ¶Cyrille
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