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  • Advanced english.. Need help :D

  • External complex has always existed, and it will always be in that way.
  • Stockholm, the capital city of Sweden, has a great issue with eternal pressure and as living adolescent in that particular area the demanding of being perfect has become more obvious.
  • The issue is that we humans frequently forget the definition of being perfect.
  • Phrase “nobody is perfect” seems to be forgotten and reaching for perfection may end up by you altering your face or body.
  • By asking young people from Stockholm about operations of beauty, and we did hope to get answers enclosing the question as why do we indicate plastic surgeries.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Stockholm, the capital city of Sweden, has a great issue with eternal pressure and as living adolescent in that particular area the demanding of being perfect has become more obvious.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
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    • Phrase “nobody is perfect” seems to be forgotten and reaching for perfection may end up by you altering your face or body.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
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    • By asking young people from Stockholm about operations of beauty, and we did hope to get answers enclosing the question as why do we indicate plastic surgeries.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5