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- i'm writing you because i have made a mistak in filling on the
I applied for a temporary visa for visiting of my familly on line, and i submitted it .but i have forgotten write the marital stutus of my brothers and sisters in section B, on form IMM 5645 .
i would appreciate it if you would consult me for correcting this problem . because i want to avoid from return of my file for it.i'm looking forward to hear from you,

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- I applied for a temporary visa for visiting of my familly on line, and i submitted it .but i have forgotten write the marital stutus of my brothers and sisters in section B, on form IMM 5645 .
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- i would appreciate it if you would consult me for correcting this problem . because i want to avoid from return of my file for it.i'm looking forward to hear from you,
  Vote now!
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