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  • December 5th.

  • Today is Thursday, December 5th.
    • Today I have a appointment in the hospital.
  • The hospital is about seven blocks from my house.
  • My doctor is my cousin.
    • The next year, when I go to study on the other city, I want to go in avion, I must buy the avion-ticket nor or these days because its most cost in those days.
    • Crossing the street from my house is the a little library.
    • Around the corner from the block in the cyber, where is my sister printing the work for her university.
  • My mom is talking with the neighbor in the opposite corner from the carpentry.
    • Yesterday, I had a date with my mom and the teacher because the day before yesterday I can't take the class.
    • I see through the window a men stand up by the traffic light, when changing to red light he goes to the top traffic and does the juggling and when it's going to changing to green light he returner by the traffic light.
  • I thing that he is improving with her friends for the gymnastics competition.
    • The next week I'm going to send a card then I'll waiting the confirmation the adress.
    • I wan't to go the a friend's bakery but I don' know how do I get to them.

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    • The next year, when I go to study on the other city, I want to go in avion, I must buy the avion-ticket nor or these days because its most cost in those days.
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    • The next year, when I go I am going to study oin the another city,. I want to go in avion, I must buy the avion-ticket nor or these days because its most cost in those days.ould like to go by plane, but I have to purchase tickets early cause they get expensive later on the year.
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    • The nNext year, when I go to study oin the other city, I want to go in ato Avion,. I must buy the aAvion-ticket nor or these days because its most cost in those daysearly as they become more expensive later on in the year.
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    • Around the corner from the block in the cyber, where is my sister printing the work for her university.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Around the corner from themy block in the cyber,there is a internet cafe, this is where is my sister printing ts her work for her university.
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    • Around the corner from themy block in the cyber, where is my sister, my sister is in the internet cafe where she is printing theof work for her university.
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    • Yesterday, I had a date with my mom and the teacher because the day before yesterday I can't take the class.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Yesterday, I had a datemeeting with my mom and the teacher because the day before yesterday I can't take theouldn't attend class.
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    • I see through the window a men stand up by the traffic light, when changing to red light he goes to the top traffic and does the juggling and when it's going to changing to green light he returner by the traffic light.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I seeaw a man through themy window a menwho was stand uping by the traffic light, when. When the lights changinged to red light he goeshe went to the top traffic and does the juggling and when it's going to changing towaiting and began to juggle. When the lights turned green light he then returner by the traffic lightd to where he was standing.
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