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Essay
Nowdays, there is at least one computer in almost everybody´s house which bring you the possibilitie of playing games.
About this subject we can find arguments both pro and against.
One of the strongest argments against is the fact that young people could make an abusive use of them If their parents do not carefully look after them and consequently the could eventually leave ther main duties as the studie obligations.
On the other hand we can find some advantages given that there are some computer games which are useful as computer games to keep a healthy mind or the body fit.
In any case I think that there are many ways to keep a healthy life style which means that it is not worth to use computer games with that aim.
In conclusion I think playing computer games is completely avoidable.
It is nothing necessary for life and sometimes it could be unhealthy for us so. why do we need them?

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câu 1
- Nowdays, there is at least one computer in almost everybody´s house which bring you the possibilitie of playing games.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- About this subject we can find arguments both pro and against.
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câu 3
- One of the strongest argments against is the fact that young people could make an abusive use of them If their parents do not carefully look after them and consequently the could eventually leave ther main duties as the studie obligations.
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câu 4
- On the other hand we can find some advantages given that there are some computer games which are useful as computer games to keep a healthy mind or the body fit.
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câu 5
- In any case I think that there are many ways to keep a healthy life style which means that it is not worth to use computer games with that aim.
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câu 6
- In conclusion I think playing computer games is completely avoidable.
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câu 7
- It is nothing necessary for life and sometimes it could be unhealthy for us so. why do we need them?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7