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  • Black Friday

  • When is not only Halloween.
    • When is about managing money, the American traditions have not rivals, and consequently they involve also our “culture.” Apple, Amazon and in the most background, Microsoft, get start the Black Friday also in Italy, which is trying to involve Italian people, thanks to the biggest US brands since some years ago.
  • As tradition, in the United States, the fourth Thursday of November is always dedicated to the Thanksgiving Day, where Catholics celebrate the end of the harvest-time.
    • The day after, then, it is the turn of the Black Friday, the Friday which let start the Christmas shopping season, because there are dedicated discounts and offers.
    • And while in America the days are a very consolidate tradition, which gets also the stock market and the investors to valuate the impact of the first purchases about the economy to prevent the future scenarios, also the Italian traders try to imitate the United States since some years ago.
    • In Italy, as said before, especially Apple and Amazon are going to steal the scene of the trade, which have decided to open the door of their store to Italian customers, preparing offers for the occasion.
  • The offers are valid only for the Black Friday till midnight, as the American tradition.
    • The regular Apple customers will can go to the official stores in Italy and discover the offers which Apple has thought for them, or visit the special pages in the online store.

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    • When is about managing money, the American traditions have not rivals, and consequently they involve also our “culture.” Apple, Amazon and in the most background, Microsoft, get start the Black Friday also in Italy, which is trying to involve Italian people, thanks to the biggest US brands since some years ago.
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    • When is about managing money, the American traditions have not rivals, and consequently they involve also our “culture.” Apple, Amazon and in the most background, Microsoft, gethave managed to start the Black Friday also in Italy, which is trying to involve Italian peoples, thanks to the biggest US brands since somefew years ago.
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    • As tradition, in the United States, the fourth Thursday of November is always dedicated to the Thanksgiving Day, where Catholics celebrate the end of the harvest-time.
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    • The day after, then, it is the turn of the Black Friday, the Friday which let start the Christmas shopping season, because there are dedicated discounts and offers.
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    • The day after, then, it is the turn of the Black Friday, the Friday which letgive start to the Christmas shopping season, because there are dedicated discounts and offers.
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    • And while in America the days are a very consolidate tradition, which gets also the stock market and the investors to valuate the impact of the first purchases about the economy to prevent the future scenarios, also the Italian traders try to imitate the United States since some years ago.
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    • And while in America the days are a very consolidate tradition, which gets also the stock market and the investors to valuate the impact of the first purchases about the economy to prevent the future scenarios, also the Italian traders try to imitate the United States since some the last few years ago.
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    • In Italy, as said before, especially Apple and Amazon are going to steal the scene of the trade, which have decided to open the door of their store to Italian customers, preparing offers for the occasion.
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    • In Italy, as said before, especially Apple and Amazon are going to stealmonopolize the scene of the trade, which have decided to open the door of their store to Italian customers, preparing offers for the occasion.
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    • The regular Apple customers will can go to the official stores in Italy and discover the offers which Apple has thought for them, or visit the special pages in the online store.
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    • The regular Apple customers will can go to the official stores in Italy and discover the offers which Apple has thought for them, or visit the special pages ion the online store. ¶
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