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  • On my house.

    • Today is Tuesday, January 8th, this morning when the sun rose, I slept when Xiomy called me, I woke up and I listened her, she have said me: open your room door.
    • Then I open the door, and saw her with a sun flower stuffed, I love the sunflowers.
  • Later, I've took a shower and I've shut my house and in this moment I remembered that the keys was on the fridge.
    • I've felt rather without words.
    • IT was rather because I talk even my ears.
    • In that moment, Xiomy have said me, you don't care remember that I have a copy.
    • We went to had a breakfast, later, she went to her mother, my mother in law, smile.
    • When I was at home, I sought my draw book, and I noticed that she had it.
    • Now, I'm writing while I'm sit on the grass and we watch the stars and moon.
    • Today have a clear night, The moonlight light my night.
    • Later, my parents and her parents will get together to dinner.
    • Tomorrow, Start classes, the christmas holiday will finish.
    • I must fold my school uniform, and must will do my backpack and I must sleep early, smile, neither I do it.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Today is Tuesday, January 8th, this morning when the sun rose, I slept when Xiomy called me, I woke up and I listened her, she have said me: open your room door.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today is Tuesday, January 8th, t. This morning when the sun rose, I was asleept when Xiomy called me,. I woke up and I listened to her, she have said to me: "open your room door".
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  • câu 3
    • Later, I've took a shower and I've shut my house and in this moment I remembered that the keys was on the fridge.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • In that moment, Xiomy have said me, you don't care remember that I have a copy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In that moment, Xiomy have said me, you don't care remember that I have a copy. At that Xiomy said to me:"Don't you remember that I have a copy?"
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  • câu 7
    • We went to had a breakfast, later, she went to her mother, my mother in law, smile.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We went to had a breakfast, later, she went to her mother, my mother in law, smile. Then we went into the house to have breakfast. Later she went to her mother, my mother-in-law.:)
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  • câu 8
    • When I was at home, I sought my draw book, and I noticed that she had it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When I was at home, I sought my draw book, and I noticed that she had it. When I was at home I tried to look for my Art album, but I recollected that it was at Xiomy's place
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    • I must fold my school uniform, and must will do my backpack and I must sleep early, smile, neither I do it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I must fold my school uniform, and must will do my backpack and I must sleep early, smile, neither I do it. I must fold my uniform, do my backpack, go to bed early and smile. But neither I do it.
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