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  • The Impact of Technologies on Peoples` Relationships

    • Needless to say, the spreading of modern technologies has affected the ways of communication between people enormously.
  • Of course, the most contribution in peoples` interaction was made by the Internet.
    • First of all, the Internet facilitates to communicate with wide group of people from the entire world.
    • Nowadays, there is no any problem to make friends with foreign people on-line.
  • Additionally, the Internet helps us to build cultural and working relationships as well.
  • Above all, there are a lot of people who met each other on the Internet and set up a family afterwards.
  • Needless to say, that the Global network contributes us to keep in touch with our relatives despite of the distance.
  • On the other hand, the on-line communication with interesting people may take a lot of time which could be used for education, work or family.
  • Some people become addicted to on-line chatting; they spend days and nights on the Internet and miss a lot of pleasant moments of life.
  • Above all, this kind of addiction can affect their future study or career.
  • One more negative side of the Internet communication is annoying people.
  • This kind of people sends offensive messages and leave hostile comments making the on-line time absolutely unpleasant.
  • In conclusion, the modern technologies did make a great contribution in peoples` interaction opening the various opportunities for private, cultural and working exchange.
  • In my opinion, the on-line communication is a priceless gift to humanity which disadvantages can be avoided by staying in moderation while using this gift.

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    • Needless to say, the spreading of modern technologies has affected the ways of communication between people enormously.
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    • Needless to say, that the Global network contributes us to keep in touch with our relatives despite of the distance.
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    • On the other hand, the on-line communication with interesting people may take a lot of time which could be used for education, work or family.
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    • Some people become addicted to on-line chatting; they spend days and nights on the Internet and miss a lot of pleasant moments of life.
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    • This kind of people sends offensive messages and leave hostile comments making the on-line time absolutely unpleasant.
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    • In conclusion, the modern technologies did make a great contribution in peoples` interaction opening the various opportunities for private, cultural and working exchange.
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    • In my opinion, the on-line communication is a priceless gift to humanity which disadvantages can be avoided by staying in moderation while using this gift.
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