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Teks daripada boilis - English

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Hello everyone!
I'm Italian.
I'm looking for an English pen friend.
I like talking about everything.
- I'd like to learn more as possible about England.
Send me a message if you are interested.

boilisJanuary 2013Undi sekarang!
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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hello everyone!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- I'm Italian.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I'm looking for an English pen friend.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I like talking about everything.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I'd like to learn more as possible about England.
  Undi sekarang!
- I'd like to learn ~~more~~as much as possible about England.
  anneg52 Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- I'd like to learn ~~more as possible about England~~about England as much as possible.
  montyHallProblem Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- Send me a message if you are interested.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5