Korrigeringer

A Mini Essay: Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet

• I think the first important advantage of the Internet is sharing information among people around the world.

• Sometimes at work I stack with the problem and the search helps me to find out a solution for it.

• Through the Internet you could communicate with people who have the same point of view and interest.

• To illustrate my point, I have written a blog for 9 years, at which I describe my current goals and results that I have achieved.

• The second benefit is working at home.

• In that case you do not need to spend any time for road to work.

• I used to work at home and most of my money I earn only by using the Internet.

• Finally I use the Internet for spent a leisure time, because I like to watch fresh movies, TV shows and educational programs.

• In case of disadvantages, I would say that sometime online surfing it is a time wasting.

• For instance, I used to read a lot of articles that don't relative to my interest.

• As a result I spent a lot of time for reading and I do not remember anything that I have read.

• The second problem of the Internet is online-gaming.

• For example my brother who spent all of his time after work in front of his computer just by playing video games, It makes me sad.

• In addition, the Internet would hurt the children’s feelings, if they get access to inappropriate information.

• To conclude, the Internet is the most important part of my life, I use it at work, for my hobbies and for leisure time.

• I do not how I could learn English, if I would not use the Internet.