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    • Lettre de motivation

  • I am eagerly applying for the position of assistant in your international Finance Team.
  • I heard your company just signed a new joint venture in China which has been mentioned in the job advertisement.
  • I believe that my educational background and work experience would make me an ideal candidate for this position.
    • I am currently in Master's degree in banking and international business at Marseille University.
    • As my resume reflects, I have my bachelor degree in Management and economics which has given me a strong foundation in most of the current management principles.
    • During the three last years, I have learned about accounting, management and marketing skills and I am an experienced user of several accounting software programs.
    • The last four months of the bachelor, I did an accounting and audit internship for the Registered Public Accounting Firm（Tian Hua) in China, which gave me a good foundation in organisation and accounting.
    • I not only have learned to practice the theoretical knowledge of accounting: book keeping and declare dutiable goods, but I also got a new practical skills on audit: prepare detailed reports on audit findings. YES!
  • I believe I am suitable for the position because my enthusiasm and commitment would be hugely valuable to your organisation.
    • When I was a member of my STEP team in the university, I was the team leading.
  • Being rigorous and adaptable to the environment, I can work under pressure.
    • In the last work experience, I just spend a afternoon to redresser a company’s financial report, because the company needs it the next day.
    • So I know how to work more effectively especially under the pressure.
    • Besides, my mother tongue is Chinese, I am aware of the communication skills and that will help you to develop the Asian markets ,particularly in China.
    • For exemple, once I negotiated the sale price of the parts of computer when I worked in company KAI PU .
  • I would be greatly honored to have the chance to further discuss this position with you.
    • The attached resume provides additional information as to my qualifications and contact information.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration.
  • I look forward to hearing from you .

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    • I heard your company just signed a new joint venture in China which has been mentioned in the job advertisement.
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    • I believe that my educational background and work experience would make me an ideal candidate for this position.
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    • As my resume reflects, I have my bachelor degree in Management and economics which has given me a strong foundation in most of the current management principles.
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    • During the three last years, I have learned about accounting, management and marketing skills and I am an experienced user of several accounting software programs.
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    • During the last three last years, I have learned about accounting, management and marketing skills and. I am an experienced user of several accounting software programs.
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    • During the last three last years, I have learned about accounting, management and marketing skills and. I am an experienced user of several accounting software programs.
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    • The last four months of the bachelor, I did an accounting and audit internship for the Registered Public Accounting Firm（Tian Hua) in China, which gave me a good foundation in organisation and accounting.
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    • The last four months of the bachelor program, I did an accounting and audit internship for the Registered Public Accounting Firm（Tian Hua) in China, which gaives me a good foundation in organisation and accounting.
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    • I not only have learned to practice the theoretical knowledge of accounting: book keeping and declare dutiable goods, but I also got a new practical skills on audit: prepare detailed reports on audit findings. YES!
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    • I've not only have learned to practice the theoretical knowledge of accounting:, book keeping and declare dutiable goods, but I also gothave a new practical skills on audit:s and prepared detailed reports on audit findings. YES!
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    • I believe I am suitable for the position because my enthusiasm and commitment would be hugely valuable to your organisation.
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    • In the last work experience, I just spend a afternoon to redresser a company’s financial report, because the company needs it the next day.
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    • Besides, my mother tongue is Chinese, I am aware of the communication skills and that will help you to develop the Asian markets ,particularly in China.
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    • Besides, mMy mother tongue is Chinese, I am aware of theand I possess the required communication skills and that which will help you to develop the Asian markets , particularly in China.
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