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  • something for tomorrow, plz help. Is it good enough?

    • Introduction: This movie which we have chosen, narratives about a middle aged woman who is not afraid to follow and venture her dreams.
    • Her entire family is completely abominable and egocentric.
    • She feels completely unfortunate and the only thing that gives her vitality is boxing and that’s the reason she tries it out.
    • With help from trainers and her own perseverance she manage to succeed and earn big money.
    • Because it’s titled as Million dollar baby it can get easy to imagine the film being fortunate or in other words a happy ending Hollywood film.
    • However, it ends tragically and beyond the grief the film is sending an important message which we are going to tell you about.
    • Audience opinion: When the film released in cinemas, people had various opinions but the vast majority liked it and thought it was great made and produced.
    • This film, as mentioned, is about gender and it can frequently be found in different films, and we found a girl boxing not so quite controversial.
    • We would perhaps if the film were made some decades earlier, but in our modern world, girls trying out boxing has noticeable increased.
    • However, this film has actually won 4 Grammies the same year as it was launched.
  • So it really must be good.

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    • Introduction: This movie which we have chosen, narratives about a middle aged woman who is not afraid to follow and venture her dreams.
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    • Introduction: This movie, which we have chosen, narratives aboutthe story of a middle -aged woman who is not afraid to follow and venturelive up to her dreams.
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    • She feels completely unfortunate and the only thing that gives her vitality is boxing and that’s the reason she tries it out.
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    • She feels completely unfortunatehappy and the only thing that gives her vitality is boxing and that’s the reasonhope /inspires her is boxing, which is why she tries it out.
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    • Because it’s titled as Million dollar baby it can get easy to imagine the film being fortunate or in other words a happy ending Hollywood film.
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    • Because it’s As it is entitled as Million dollar baby it can get easy to imagine the film being fortunate or in other words a happy ending Hollywood filmthe film can misleadingly be construed as an optimistic one, eg as offering a typical Hollywood-like happy end.
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    • However, it ends tragically and beyond the grief the film is sending an important message which we are going to tell you about.
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    • However, it ends tragically and beyond the grief the film is sendingconveys an important message, which we are going to tell you about.
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    • Audience opinion: When the film released in cinemas, people had various opinions but the vast majority liked it and thought it was great made and produced.
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    • Audience's opinion: When the film got released in cinemas, people had various opinions but the vast majority liked it and thought it was greatly/well made and produced.
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    • This film, as mentioned, is about gender and it can frequently be found in different films, and we found a girl boxing not so quite controversial.
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    • This film, asAs previously mentioned, this film is about gender and it can frequently be found in different films, and we found a girl boxing, which is a topic that has often been tackled in different films. Hence, a female boxing champion is not so quite controversial.
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    • We would perhaps if the film were made some decades earlier, but in our modern world, girls trying out boxing has noticeable increased.
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    • We would perhaps habe minded if the film werehad been made some decades earlier, but in our modern world, girls trying outthe number of female boxingers has noticeabley increased.
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