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- something you have no choice.
- The world is just like a cut cheese cake, each pieces own different favors.
- I happened to pick the salty one.
- At first I don’t like it but now I cannot live without it.

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- something you have no choice.
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- something you ~~have no~~can't choicose.
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Ayat 1
- The world is just like a cut cheese cake, each pieces own different favors.
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- The world is just like a cut cheese cake, each piece~~s own~~ has a different flavours.
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Ayat 2
- I happened to pick the salty one.
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- I happened to have picked the salty one.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- At first I don’t like it but now I cannot live without it.
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- At first I d~~on’~~idn't like it but now I cannot live without it.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3