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  • November 19th.

  • Today is Tuesday, November 19th.
    • Today we don't had class, then, our group and somebody did a circle and everyone related a joke.
    • Last friday while everybody was sleeping, I was going in the school bus, and we had a shock with other bus.
    • In that moment I was going while I was sleeping and I don't saw what happened, only I woke up and rose up and I had a terrible neck pain.
    • Did my time to focus my attention and notice myself what happened, Now, today Tuesday I feel so good, I took the chances and my girl pampered me all weekend.
    • I think that I have will to survive, last weeks all it's going so good, I was accepted to the University, and I have a chance that my girl is going to the same University.
    • Today a political men said something that I still feel so angry, he said: "the woman don't must participe in the political on my country, only the men." I feel so angry but all girls women in the radio, television, and internet are pressing for a excuse from that man.

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    • In that moment I was going while I was sleeping and I don't saw what happened, only I woke up and rose up and I had a terrible neck pain.
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    • InAt that moment I was going while I was asleeping and I doidn't sawnotice what was happened, onlying. I woke up, and rose up anwhen I moved I had a terrible neck pain.
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    • Did my time to focus my attention and notice myself what happened, Now, today Tuesday I feel so good, I took the chances and my girl pampered me all weekend.
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    • Did my time to focus my attention and notice myselIt took a while to be fully aware of what had happened, Now, t. Today, Tuesday, I feelt so good, that I took themy chances, and my girl pampered me all weekend.
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    • I think that I have will to survive, last weeks all it's going so good, I was accepted to the University, and I have a chance that my girl is going to the same University.
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    • I think that I have will toI'll survive, l. Last weeks all it's going so good, went very well, as I was accepted to the Uuniversity, and I have college, and there is a chance that my girl is goingwill go to the same Uuniversity.
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    • Today a political men said something that I still feel so angry, he said: "the woman don't must participe in the political on my country, only the men." I feel so angry but all girls women in the radio, television, and internet are pressing for a excuse from that man.
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    • Today a male politicial men said something that I still feel so angry, h. He said:, "tThe womaen don't must not participate in the political os in my country, only the men can." I feel so angry, but allthe girls and women ion the radio, television, and internet are pressing for an excuse forom thatis man.
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    • Today, a male politicial men said something that I still feel sovery angry, h about. He said: "the wWomaen don't musn't participate in the politicals onf my country, only the men." I feel so angry but all girlsthe women ion the radio, television, and internet are pressing for a excuse from thautting the man under pressure in order to get man apology.
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