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    • III) The change-over phenomenon: This changeover phenomenon is that which makes British regime in ahead of other regimes.
    • As the opposition is recognized, it has the means to prepare itself.
    • Its preparation has an important influence over the majority party and in a larger scale an influence over the legal system: it creates dynamism: it’s a driving force behind the system.
    • Because: - The starting point: As it prepares itself, it will have more opportunities in the next election because the public knows that it is ready.
    • - So, we can say that there is a link between the majority dynamism because the more the opposition does its job well; the more it in turn informs the population therefore increasing its own support.
    • So, the more it does its job well, the more it forces the majority to do its job well as well.
    • This creates the two party system (bipartism): minority knows that it can win the next election & the majority knows that is can lose.
    • “Swing of the pendulum”.
  • So, there is a real sense of respect for the minority.
    • Finally, we are going to present the last aspect in which the opposition plays a key role.
    • IV) The government's opinion: - The opposition has a positive role because it puts pressure on the majority.
  • This implies that the 2 parties have to present a realistic program because they have equal opportunities to be elected (two party system).
  • > Here, the role of the minority is to ensure that the winning party implements the program that it promised during its campaign in the best manner possible.
    • > In addition, if the program is not suitable for social activities during his term, he will have to revise its program because the minority will consider whether it is consistent with the expectations of the nation or not.
    • So, we have an important supervision of the minority that takes over the public opinion.
    • Labour leader Ed Milliband has mocked David Cameron for attempting to block a European Union cap on bankers bonuses.
    • Here we see that even if a criticize is made by Ed Miliband at Prime Minister James Cameron , there is always a good atmosphere in Parliament .
    • Parties even if they are opposed do not destroy each other as they could do in France .
    • The parliamentary debate in Great Britain seems to be constructive for the nation

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    • III) The change-over phenomenon: This changeover phenomenon is that which makes British regime in ahead of other regimes.
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    • III) The change-over phenomenon: "Thise changeover" is a phenomenon is that which makes the British regime in ahead of other regimebetter than others.
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    • As the opposition is recognized, it has the means to prepare itself.
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    • As the opposition is recognized, it has the means to prepare itselfstrenght and weakness of the opposition is known ahead of time, the minority party has the ability to devise a better strategy.
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    • Its preparation has an important influence over the majority party and in a larger scale an influence over the legal system: it creates dynamism: it’s a driving force behind the system.
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    • ItThis preparation has an important influence over the majority party and in a larger scale an influence over the legal system:; it creates dynamism: it’s a, which then becomes the driving force behind the system.
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    • Because: - The starting point: As it prepares itself, it will have more opportunities in the next election because the public knows that it is ready.
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    • Because: - TheAs a starting point: As it prepares itself, it, each party will have more opportunities in the nextof getting electioned, because the public knows that it is readyunderstands them better.
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    • - So, we can say that there is a link between the majority dynamism because the more the opposition does its job well; the more it in turn informs the population therefore increasing its own support.
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    • - So, we can sayHence, it can be said that there is a link between the majority dynamismtwo parties because the more the opposition does its job well; the more it in turn informs the population therefore increasshines, the more it makes the ruling party to do better, thereby growing its own support base.
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    • This creates the two party system (bipartism): minority knows that it can win the next election & the majority knows that is can lose.
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    • This creates thea two party system (bipartism): the minority knows that it can win the next election &, while the majority knows that is can lose.
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    • This implies that the 2 parties have to present a realistic program because they have equal opportunities to be elected (two party system).
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    • > Here, the role of the minority is to ensure that the winning party implements the program that it promised during its campaign in the best manner possible.
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    • > In addition, if the program is not suitable for social activities during his term, he will have to revise its program because the minority will consider whether it is consistent with the expectations of the nation or not.
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    • > In addition, if the programir agenda is not suitable for social activitieswelfare during histheir term, they will have to revise itstheir program because the minority will considerassess whether it is consistent with the expectations of the nation or not.
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    • Labour leader Ed Milliband has mocked David Cameron for attempting to block a European Union cap on bankers bonuses.
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    • LFor example, labour leader Ed Milliband has mocked David Cameron for attempting to block a European Union cap on bankers bonuseonuses paid to bankers.
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    • Here we see that even if a criticize is made by Ed Miliband at Prime Minister James Cameron , there is always a good atmosphere in Parliament .
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    • Here we see that even if a criticize is madeIt is to be noted that criticism aired by Ed Miliband at Prime Minister James Cameron , there is alwayshas been within the bounds of maintaining a good atmosphere inwith in the Parliament .
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