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  • Hi to all.My name is Ilya.I am a student.I want to tell you about my last summer.It was really unforgetable.When I passed my session exams I started to group with my friends for trip at the Sea.When we arrived at the our hotel we are started to drink.We are drinked all night and when we woke up we started to search the nearest pharmacy.That night was really exciting.On the second day we wanted to take a trip at the museum,but our plans was destroyed by group of girls,which were going for a wolk at the sea's shore.That group consisted of 3 blond babies and 1 girl with dark hair.
  • We took a trip to our hotel and started to play twister.When we were communicated a bit we started to drink with girls.And this process was repeated every day.Finally , we gather our bags and went at the railway station.There were typical student's holidays.I will never forget it.I found a lot of new friends.I can recommend you take a trip to Sea with your friends.

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    • Hi to all.My name is Ilya.I am a student.I want to tell you about my last summer.It was really unforgetable.When I passed my session exams I started to group with my friends for trip at the Sea.When we arrived at the our hotel we are started to drink.We are drinked all night and when we woke up we started to search the nearest pharmacy.That night was really exciting.On the second day we wanted to take a trip at the museum,but our plans was destroyed by group of girls,which were going for a wolk at the sea's shore.That group consisted of 3 blond babies and 1 girl with dark hair.
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    • We took a trip to our hotel and started to play twister.When we were communicated a bit we started to drink with girls.And this process was repeated every day.Finally , we gather our bags and went at the railway station.There were typical student's holidays.I will never forget it.I found a lot of new friends.I can recommend you take a trip to Sea with your friends.
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