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    • In my opinion is good to have sports television programmes because it could be a way to encourage people to practice them.
    • However I think we could talk about arguments for and against this subject Firstly as we say before if we show sports, specially to young people, we are encouraging the sport practice and that is the best way to keep your mind free and your body fit On the other hand, the problem we face when we think about sports which are on television is that the only sport that we see on Spanish television is football.
    • Every weekend we have football to see.
    • Too much football I would say, and I think that sometimes it is an agressive sport.
    • In conclusion I am in favour of seeing sports on television but a variety of sports not just football that is what is happening currently in Spain.

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    • In my opinion is good to have sports television programmes because it could be a way to encourage people to practice them.
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    • In my opinion, is goodt would be wonderful to have some sports television programmes because shows, also it could be a way to encourage people to practice them sports they love.
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    • However I think we could talk about arguments for and against this subject Firstly as we say before if we show sports, specially to young people, we are encouraging the sport practice and that is the best way to keep your mind free and your body fit On the other hand, the problem we face when we think about sports which are on television is that the only sport that we see on Spanish television is football.
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    • However I think we could talk about arguments for and against this subject¶¶. Firstly as weI sayid before if we show sports, especially to young people, we are encouraging the sport practicem to play sport and that is the best way to keep your mind freehealthy and your body fit. ¶On the other hand, the problem we face when we think about sports which are on television today is that the only sport that we see on Spanish television is football.
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    • However I think we could talk about arguments for and against this subject¶¶Firstly as we say before if we show sports, The pro's and cons are; As I have stated before if sports show were televised it would encourage more people to participate in activities especially to the young people,er generations we are encouraging the sport practice and that is the best way to keep your mind free and your body fit¶¶On th. Showing them how they can keep a healthy brain and a fit body.One of ther hand, the problem we face when we think about sports which are on television current problem with sport show is that the only sport that we see on Spanfootball ish television is footballed in Spain.
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    • In conclusion I am in favour of seeing sports on television but a variety of sports not just football that is what is happening currently in Spain.
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    • In conclusion, I am in favour of seewatching sports on television but a variety of sports not just football as that is what is happening currently in Spain.
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    • In conclusion, I am in favour of seehaving more sports on television but a variety of sports not just football that is what is happening currently in Spain.as long as there is a variety of sports.
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