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    • In 2009,I was an exchange-student in America, at that time it was my big step to feel rich of American culture that I ever had.
    • I learn many things from there like how to live with people who are difference nation , language, culture and everything but they can live in the same land normally.
    • It is the big point that I am in love with it, love how they can be union even though they are different and this is very unique.
    • After that I decide to work with American Embassy in Thailand, then I tried so hard to get a good university to prepare myself for the future and looking for the opportunity to make my dream come true.
    • I always follow the new up-date about American Embassy’s page on facebook,how you work or many activities in Thailand like Happy New Year video, Ambassador Kristie on The TV.
    • Show and how Ambassador Kristie learns many things about Thailand such as culture and language.
    • That made me know that she does not forgot about little thing to communicate with my country even though she has many choices to do this by let others work for her but she does it by herself.
    • Because Ambassador Kristie shows how to live in the difference nation and she is satisfy to does it, also every employee in Embassy satisfy to work and feel Thai culture, so I want to be one part of it to learn how you think about my country, how to live and company with other nation and how to be a union even though we are not the same.
    • This is all I want to join an internship in American Embassy in Thailand to get a great experience in this summer.

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  • câu 1
    • In 2009,I was an exchange-student in America, at that time it was my big step to feel rich of American culture that I ever had.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In 2009, I was an exchange-student in America, at that time it was my big step to feel rich ofnd it has been my biggest opportunity to explore American culture that I ever hado date.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • I learn many things from there like how to live with people who are difference nation , language, culture and everything but they can live in the same land normally.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I learned many things from there like how to live with people who are differenceduring my visit; the most important being how people of diverse background such as nation ality, language, culture and everything but they can live in the same land normaetc., live together peacefully.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 3
    • It is the big point that I am in love with it, love how they can be union even though they are different and this is very unique.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is the big point that I am in love with it, love how they can beare a union, even though they are different a. I find this is very unique.
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  • câu 4
    • After that I decide to work with American Embassy in Thailand, then I tried so hard to get a good university to prepare myself for the future and looking for the opportunity to make my dream come true.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After that I decided to work with the American Embassy in Thailand, then I tried sovery hard to get into a good university in order to prepare myself for the future and looking for the opportunity to make my dreams come true.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I always follow the new up-date about American Embassy’s page on facebook,how you work or many activities in Thailand like Happy New Year video, Ambassador Kristie on The TV.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I always follow the new up-dates about the American Embassy’s page on fFacebook,how such as your work or manyand your organized activities in Thailand like Happy New Year video, Ambassador Kristie on The TV.s.
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  • câu 6
    • Show and how Ambassador Kristie learns many things about Thailand such as culture and language.
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    • Show and howI also followed Ambassador Kristie on TV, who talked about how she learnsed many things about Thailand such as its culture and language.
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  • câu 7
    • That made me know that she does not forgot about little thing to communicate with my country even though she has many choices to do this by let others work for her but she does it by herself.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • That made me knowshowed me that she does not forgot about little thing toet communicateing with my country e. Even though she has many choices to do this by letcould have had others workdo that for her but, she does itcommunicates all by herself.
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    • Because Ambassador Kristie shows how to live in the difference nation and she is satisfy to does it, also every employee in Embassy satisfy to work and feel Thai culture, so I want to be one part of it to learn how you think about my country, how to live and company with other nation and how to be a union even though we are not the same.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Because Ambassador Kristie shows us how to live in thea differencet nation and she is satisfy to does it, also e. She is very happy doing it. Every employee in the American Embassy is satisfy to work and feelied with working in Thailand and enjoying Thai culture, so. Therefore I want to be onea part of it to learn how you think about my country, and how to live and company with other nation and how to be a union even though we are not the samwork in harmony with another culture.
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  • câu 9
    • This is all I want to join an internship in American Embassy in Thailand to get a great experience in this summer.
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    • This is allwhy I want to joinapply for an internship inat the American Embassy in Thailand to gethave a great experience in this summer. ¶
    • This is all I want; to join an internship inat the American Embassy in Thailand to get a great experience in this summer. and that this summer will give me great experiences.
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