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    • Once I've heard a music group called Morphine.
    • I check their songs fluently and paid not very much attention to them, just added to my playlist at VK a few.
    • It was several weeks and then I listened againg to their song Souvenir.
    • The sound was mysterious and spellbinding, song was calm and a little bit sad.
    • I think that Morphine is a one from these groups that need to be listened a several times before you estimate them rightly.
    • Then I listened to their "Take me with you", "All wrong" and my favorite "The night".
    • They charmed me by their mystery - the texts doesn't tell you some story something about feelings of singer, they tells a shorts thoughts which stacked together gives you a picture of woman which singer thinks about at this moment.
    • A lot of songs I haven't understand completely, but I think it is so great to leave a riddle for listener and not to open your heart in front of him totally.

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    • I check their songs fluently and paid not very much attention to them, just added to my playlist at VK a few.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I check their songs fluently and paid not very much attention to them, just addedSince then, I have not paid any attention to them, except for adding their music to my playlist aton VK a few.
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    • I think that Morphine is a one from these groups that need to be listened a several times before you estimate them rightly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I think that Morphine is a one ofrom theose groups, that need to be listened ato several times before you estimate them rightlyone can judge them.
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    • They charmed me by their mystery - the texts doesn't tell you some story something about feelings of singer, they tells a shorts thoughts which stacked together gives you a picture of woman which singer thinks about at this moment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • They charmed me bythrough their mystery -; the textlyrics doesn't tell you somea story something about the feelings of the singer, they tells abut instead are expressed through shorts thoughts, which when stacked together, gives you athe picture of the woman whichthe singer thinks about at, during thise moment.
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    • A lot of songs I haven't understand completely, but I think it is so great to leave a riddle for listener and not to open your heart in front of him totally.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A lot of songs I haven't understand completely, b I haven't completely understood many of their songs. But I think it is so great to leave a riddle for the listener and not to open your heart in front of him totalreveal one's heart completely.
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