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  • 10 facts about me

    • - I’m excessively clumsy (Seriously, who else would drop a 2kg watermelon on their feet, fall in the middle of the most frequented street of Madrid, make the door of their cupboard fall down, or let their brother’s iPod fall from the balcony while shaking the tablecloth?) - I cannot refrain from buying books or borrowing them from the library (even though I perfectly know I won’t have time to read them…), and neither from starting reading three books at the same time.
    • - I really get along with children more easily than with adults or people of my age and I prefer being with them (probably because they understand my childish mind way better :D) - I actually could stay by myself all day long.
    • I’m not afraid of loneliness, quite the reverse, I love it - I speak three languages fluently (French, Spanish and English) and I’m learning three others (Italian, Russian and German).
    • So yes, I think I can say that I am pretty interested in languages… - I love nature and its serenity and I’m passionate with the sky, the sun, the trees, the moon and their colours and purity - I haven’t begun to study at the university yet but I’m longing to!
    • - My favourite seasons are autumn and the beginning of winter (respectively for the wonderful colours of the trees during the bright and sunny days, and for the cold ant the lot of snow that falls in my country =D) - Though my father is an IT specialist, I’m unable to do more than really basic things with a computer and I cannot stand looking at a screen for more than three hours.
    • - The rain makes me sad and grumpy (and that’s actually why I think Spain is a great place for me to live :P)

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • - I’m excessively clumsy (Seriously, who else would drop a 2kg watermelon on their feet, fall in the middle of the most frequented street of Madrid, make the door of their cupboard fall down, or let their brother’s iPod fall from the balcony while shaking the tablecloth?) - I cannot refrain from buying books or borrowing them from the library (even though I perfectly know I won’t have time to read them…), and neither from starting reading three books at the same time.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • - I’m excessively clumsy (Seriously, who else would drop a 2kg watermelon on their feet, fall over in the middle of the most frequentedbusiest street ofin Madrid, make the door of their cupboard fall down, or letbreak their cupboard door or knock their brother’s iPod fall fromoff the balcony while shaking the tablecloth?)¶- I cannot refrain fromsist buying books or borrowing them from the library (even though I perfectly know I won’t have time to read them…), and neithenor from starting to reading three books at the same time.
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    • - I really get along with children more easily than with adults or people of my age and I prefer being with them (probably because they understand my childish mind way better :D) - I actually could stay by myself all day long.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • - I reactually get along with children more easily than with adults or people of my age and I prefer being with them (probably because they understand my childish mind way better :D)¶- I actually could stay by myselfcan sit on my own all day long.
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    • I’m not afraid of loneliness, quite the reverse, I love it - I speak three languages fluently (French, Spanish and English) and I’m learning three others (Italian, Russian and German).
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I’m not afraid of loneliness, - quite the reverse, I love it.¶- I speak three languages fluently (French, Spanish and English) and I’m learning three others (Italian, Russian and German).
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    • So yes, I think I can say that I am pretty interested in languages… - I love nature and its serenity and I’m passionate with the sky, the sun, the trees, the moon and their colours and purity - I haven’t begun to study at the university yet but I’m longing to!
      Äänestä nyt!
    • So yes, I think I can say that I am pretty interested in languages…¶- I love nature and its serenity and I’m passionate withabout the sky, the sun, the trees, the moon and their colours and purity¶- I haven’t begun to study at thestarted university yet but I’m longing really want to!
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    • - My favourite seasons are autumn and the beginning of winter (respectively for the wonderful colours of the trees during the bright and sunny days, and for the cold ant the lot of snow that falls in my country =D) - Though my father is an IT specialist, I’m unable to do more than really basic things with a computer and I cannot stand looking at a screen for more than three hours.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • - My favourite seasons are autumn and the beginning of winter (respectively for the wonderful colours of the trees during the bright and sunny days, and for the cold antd the lot ofick snow that falls in my country =, respectively :D)¶- TAlthough my father i's an IT specialist, I’m unable to do more than the really basic things with a computer and I cannot stand looking at a screen for more than three hours.
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