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- Alice Della Rocca hated skiing school.
- She hated the alarm clock at 07:30 a.m. and in the Christmas holiday too.
- She hated the wool tights because they burn her thigh, the gloves that paralyse her fingers and the crash helmet pushs her cheeks.

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- Alice Della Rocca hated skiing school.
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- Alice Della Rocca hated the ski~~ing~~ school.
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- Alice Della Rocca hated skiing school. (see comment)
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- She hated the alarm clock at 07:30 a.m. and in the Christmas holiday too.
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- She hated the alarm clock sounding at 07:30 a.m. ~~and in the Christmas holiday too~~every day, even at Christmas.
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- She hated the alarm clock at 07:30 a.m. and in the Christmas holiday too.
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- She hated the wool tights because they burn her thigh, the gloves that paralyse her fingers and the crash helmet pushs her cheeks.
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- She hated the wool tights b~~ecause they b~~urning her thighs, the gloves ~~that~~ paralyseing her fingers and the crash helmet ~~pushs~~squeezing her cheeks.
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