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  • Facebook

  • Do you have a facebook or a twitter account ?
    • Yes i have a facebook account for 5 years .I had a twitter account but i delete it because i don’t really use it.
    • Why do you use it for ?
    • In first the i use facebook to chat with my friend but i spend most of the time on facebook seeing the news of my friends.I use also facebook to post photos like my holiday photos, but i don’t like people who tell them life a lot on their wall.
    • Moreover i use it for see the life of music artist , actor and groups like the group of the football team « Olympique de Marseille » where i can see the informations of the team andthe evolution of the work of the stadium .
    • Sometimes i watch videos that people post on facebook such as the video taken from the TV of « le petit journal ».
    • In conclusion ,i use facebook regulary and i really like it because i can do a lot of different thing.a

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    • Yes i have a facebook account for 5 years .I had a twitter account but i delete it because i don’t really use it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Yes i have a facebook account for 5 years .I had a twitter account but i deleted it because i don’t really use it.
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    • Yes i, I have a facebook account. I had it for 5 years . I had a twitter account but i deleted it because iI don’t really use it.
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    • Yes i, I have a facebook account for 5 years .I hadand also a twitter account but i delete it because i don’t really use it.
      sayedasifsayedasif profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • In first the i use facebook to chat with my friend but i spend most of the time on facebook seeing the news of my friends.I use also facebook to post photos like my holiday photos, but i don’t like people who tell them life a lot on their wall.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • InAt first the iI used facebook to chat with my friend but ithen I spendt most of the time on facebook seeing the news of my friends. Also, I use also facebook to post photos like my holiday photos, but i don’t like people who tell themalk about thier life a lot on their wall.
      badcanadabadcanada profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In first the i use facebook to chat with my friend but i spend most of the time on facebook seeing the news of my friends.I use also use facebook to post photos like my holiday photos, but i don’t like people who tell about themre life a lot on their wall.
      sayedasifsayedasif profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Moreover i use it for see the life of music artist , actor and groups like the group of the football team « Olympique de Marseille » where i can see the informations of the team andthe evolution of the work of the stadium .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Moreover i use it forto see the life of music artists , actors and groups like the group of the football team « Olympique de Marseille » where i can see the informations of the team and the evolution of the work ofn theier stadium .
      badcanadabadcanada profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Moreover i use it for seeto know about the life of music artist , actor and groups like the group of the football team « Olympique de Marseille » where i can see get the informations of the team and there evolution of the work of the stadium .
      sayedasifsayedasif profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Sometimes i watch videos that people post on facebook such as the video taken from the TV of « le petit journal ».
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Sometimes i watch videos that people post on facebook, such as thfor example videos taken from the TV ofprogram « le petit journal ».
      badcanadabadcanada profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Sometimes iI watch the videos that people post on facebook , such as the videos taken from the TV of « le petit journal ».
      JSHINEJSHINE profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Sometimes iI watches videos that people post on facebook such as the video taken from the TV of « le petit journal ».
      sayedasifsayedasif profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • In conclusion ,i use facebook regulary and i really like it because i can do a lot of different thing.a
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In conclusion ,i use facebook regulary and i really like it because i can do a lot of different things with it.a¶¶¶¶
      badcanadabadcanada profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In conclusion ,iI use facebook regulary and iI really like it because iI can do a lot of different things.a¶¶¶¶
      JSHINEJSHINE profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In conclusion ,i,I use facebook regulary and iI really like it because iI can do a lot of different things.a¶¶¶¶
      sayedasifsayedasif profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7