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    • Hello ^_^ I have a home work for English lesson , i should write it before this Tursday so help me pleaze.
    • I should write a paragpraph about my mother : So my mother have 65 years old, she's borne in a small coastall city in north of Algeria called jijel.She's arose in a simple familly with five brothers and one sister.
    • Although she's not educated but she was a good housewife where she fondle three Children , me and two girls.
    • After all this years Although she's become a little fat and there are ome white hair in her head my mother Still looks young with her tan skin and her big eyes (^_^).
    • thank you all mothers and God protect them (^_^)

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    • I should write a paragpraph about my mother : So my mother have 65 years old, she's borne in a small coastall city in north of Algeria called jijel.She's arose in a simple familly with five brothers and one sister.
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    • I should write a paragpraph about my mother :¶¶ So mMy mother haveis 65 years old, she'. She was borne in a small coastall city in the north of Algeria called jJijel. She's aro was raised in a simple familly with five brothers and one sister.
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    • Although she's not educated but she was a good housewife where she fondle three Children , me and two girls.
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    • Although she's not educated but, she was a good housewife where she fondle, and had three Cchildren , me and: two girls, and me.
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    • Although she's not educated but, she wais a good housewife where sand a caring mother fondler her three Cchildren , me and two girls.
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    • Although she's not well educated but she wais a good housewife where she fondleand she is a kind and loving mother to three Cchildren , meyself and two girls.
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    • After all this years Although she's become a little fat and there are ome white hair in her head my mother Still looks young with her tan skin and her big eyes (^_^).
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    • After all thisese years A, although she's become a little fat and tshere are has some white hair in her heads, my mother Sstill looks young , with her tan skin and her big eyes. (^_^).
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    • After all thisese years Although, she's becoame a little fatplump and there are ome white hair is on her head but my mother Sstill looks young with her taned skin and her big eyes (^_^).
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