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  • I am writing in support of Aurelie as a candidate for your Masters program.
    • From June to August 2012 Aurelie has worked for me as an aupair and she looked after my 11 years old daughter.
    • Aurelie clearly has a strong passion for the fahion industry in light of the fact that together we watched a TV program from the United States (it is not broadcasted in France) a competition between young fashion stylists who had to design clothes and she enjoyed it a lot.
    • Moreover I am sure her sense of creativity will be a strong asset for this Masters, indeed when she took care of my daughter she taught her how to create nice small objects made out of polymer clay.
    • Together they made a tiny Louis Vuitton like bag key ring for me and it was remarkably well done.
  • Aurelie is devoted to her work, she is flexible and willing to work on any task that is assigned to her.
    • In addition, she is extremely organized, reliable and she is polyvalent for she can speak different languages.
  • In view of this experience, I have no hesitations in recommending Aurelie for your study programme.
    • Please do feel free to contact me with questions or inquirie at ...

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    • Aurelie clearly has a strong passion for the fahion industry in light of the fact that together we watched a TV program from the United States (it is not broadcasted in France) a competition between young fashion stylists who had to design clothes and she enjoyed it a lot.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Aurelie clearly has a strong passion for the fashion industry in light of the fact that together we watched a TV program from the United States (it is notas evidenced by her desire to watch fashion television shows broadcasted in France) a competition between young fashion stylists who had to design clothes and she enjoyed it a lotAmerica whose premise is having young fashion stylists compete in clothing design.
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      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
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    • Moreover I am sure her sense of creativity will be a strong asset for this Masters, indeed when she took care of my daughter she taught her how to create nice small objects made out of polymer clay.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Moreover, I am sure her sense of creativity will be a strong asset for this Masters, i. Indeed, when she took care of my daughter, she taught her how to create nice small objects made out of polymer clay.
      erickgerickg profile picture Komentar
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
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