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Hello, my name is Kristina.
- Im 21 years old.
- Im from Ukraine.
- Now I am student of Donetsk state university of managment, sociologist.
- I would like to find foreigher friend to chat).
- I know Russian language,but my English isnt perfect

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- I would like to find foreigher friend to chat)
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- I would like to find foreighner friend to chat)
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- I would like to find ~~foreigher~~an English-speaking friend to chat) with.
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- Hello, my name is Kristina.
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- Im 21 years old.
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- I'm 21 years old.
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- Im from Ukraine.
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- I'm from Ukraine.
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- I'm from the Ukraine.
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- Now I am student of Donetsk state university of managment, sociologist.
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- ~~Now~~At this time, I am a student of Donetsk sState uUniversity of mManagement, sin Sociolog~~ist~~y.
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- Now I am a student of the Donetsk sState uUniversity of mManagement, studying sociolog~~ist~~y.
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- ~~Now~~Currently, I am a student ofstudying sociology at the Donetsk sState uUniversity of mManagement~~, sociologist~~.
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- I would like to find foreigher friend to chat).
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- I would like to find ~~foreigher~~an English-speaking friend to chat) with.
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- I know Russian language,but my English isnt perfect
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- I ~~know~~speak Russian ~~language~~, but my English isn't perfect.
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- ~~I know Russian language,but my English isnt perfect~~My first language is Russian. I would like to improve my English.
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I would like to find foreigher friend to chat)

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