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Hello
I would like to see my mistakes.
So, please, help me with it.
- I'm here, because i would like ti teach english better and I don't have penfriends.
- So I want to get it Thanks

poskinOctober 2013Undi sekarang!
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Title
- Hello
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- I would like to see my mistakes.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- So, please, help me with it.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I'm here, because i would like ti teach english better and I don't have penfriends.
  Undi sekarang!
- I'm here, because iI would like tio teach english better and I don't have penfriends.
  poskin Ulasan
  
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- I'm here, because iI would like tio teach eEnglish better and I don't have ~~penfriend~~any pen pals.
  masjns2424 Ulasan 1
  
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- I'm here, because iI would like t~~i teach e~~o learn English better ~~and I don't have~~/ to improve my English and find penfriends.
  maikaeferli Ulasan
  
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- I'm here~~, because i would like ti teach english better and I don't have penfriends~~ to improve on my English and would like to find a pen pal.
  Jonnyfrank Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- So I want to get it Thanks
  Undi sekarang!
- So I want to get it.¶Thanks.
  masjns2424 Ulasan
  
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- So ~~I want to get it¶~~that's what I'm trying to achieve. Thanks
  maikaeferli Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4