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Văn bản từ zihaowang - English

  • Composition correction

  • MANY THANKS!
  • Ostensibly, Comparing with the past, numbered methods can be used for communication, and the active areas for human were also limited.
  • People can only communicated each other by some slowly correspondence ways, such as: letters, smoke or lighting as examples.
  • Saying from modern perspective those tools were inefficient and complicated.
  • However, the reality is people who lived in the past were more acceptable and easy-going than the modern people.
  • We can usually see the worm and cozy fragments in costume movies, and the fragile relationship can be always found in modern emotion plays.
  • It cannot be simply attributed to coincidence, because the modern communications facilities and many other factors which can attract people’s attentions are making everyone addicted.
  • People paid too much time on virtual social networks; it led the overlooking of family relationship directly.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Ostensibly, Comparing with the past, numbered methods can be used for communication, and the active areas for human were also limited.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • People can only communicated each other by some slowly correspondence ways, such as: letters, smoke or lighting as examples.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • However, the reality is people who lived in the past were more acceptable and easy-going than the modern people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • We can usually see the worm and cozy fragments in costume movies, and the fragile relationship can be always found in modern emotion plays.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • It cannot be simply attributed to coincidence, because the modern communications facilities and many other factors which can attract people’s attentions are making everyone addicted.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • People paid too much time on virtual social networks; it led the overlooking of family relationship directly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8