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- My family.
Hello!
- My name is Natalya!
- I have a small family - my husband and two my children - daughter and sun.
- I have been married for foorteen years old.
- My sun is thirteen and daughter is nine years old.
- They are at school.

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Tiêu đề
- My family.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- My fFamily.
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câu 1
- Hello!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 2
- My name is Natalya!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- My name is Nataliya!/ Natalia.
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câu 3
- I have a small family - my husband and two my children - daughter and sun.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I have a small family -, my husband and two my children -, a daughter and sua son.
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câu 4
- I have been married for foorteen years old.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I have been married for 14 ( foourteen) years ~~old~~.
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- I have been married for foourteen years ~~old~~.
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- My sun is thirteen and daughter is nine years old.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- My/our suon is ~~thirteen and~~13 and the daughter is ~~nine~~ 9 (years old) .
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- They are at school.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- They ~~are at school~~go to school. / They are schoolchildren.
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