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  • Despair is the beginning

    • Bob is a marathon runner and right now in the middle of a race he is fighting to death to be the first one passing the finish line.
  • He may not be the best but he is doing his best!
  • As we all know, it is a nature of competition to get the better of others or be taken over.
    • For our runner, Bob, the last is true and he sees others passing by.
  • At first it’s normal for him, since he is a professional runner, but gradually he begins to lose hope!
    • And unfortunately the black clouds of despairs come heavily down on him and he stops!
  • We all know what it means and what happens to him if he doesn’t get over immediately.
    • He never meets the finish line!
  • Knowing this, his friends try to encourage him to finish the race but Bob is beyond recovery.
    • Some racers are never meant to finish, he is thinking, and I’m one of them.
  • This competition is just a big lie because they claim that we all have even chances and we don’t!
  • So our dear Bob is at the verge of distrust and a low despair voice tells him “You can never do it, it’s over now!” To utter astonishment of everyone Bob stands and turns around to begin the reverse track!
    • It is no wonder he says lately that there is no finish line or who said that we should compete or all that but the truth be told, he knows for sure that there is an end but he just has no hope for it and the bitterness of defeat makes him oppose!
  • He never proves that there is no end because he has just begun from it as a beginning ^__^

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    • Bob is a marathon runner and right now in the middle of a race he is fighting to death to be the first one passing the finish line.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Bob is a marathon runner and right now in the middle of a race h. He is fighting to death to be the first one passing the finish line.
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    • At first it’s normal for him, since he is a professional runner, but gradually he begins to lose hope!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • So our dear Bob is at the verge of distrust and a low despair voice tells him “You can never do it, it’s over now!” To utter astonishment of everyone Bob stands and turns around to begin the reverse track!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It is no wonder he says lately that there is no finish line or who said that we should compete or all that but the truth be told, he knows for sure that there is an end but he just has no hope for it and the bitterness of defeat makes him oppose!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is no wonder he saysthat he lately says that there is no finish line or who said that we should compete or all that but the truth be told, he knows for sure that there is an end but he just has no hope for it and the bitterness of defeat makes him oppose!
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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