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  • Who I am looking for

    • After long time travel, I think I should find a place to stay and hope to find a right lady to share each other our life.
    • I have some friends, my good family, but a life partner is still important.
    • I enjoy share my life to her, great to know anything about her.
  • I will do anything I can do to make her happy.
  • Because she will become a very important part of my life.
    • I came from Taiwan, first language is Mandarin and Taiwanese, I could speak English, although it is not perfect. so I do not mind where are you came from, or what is your first language.
    • People in this website should be know some English.
    • We should not have much communication problems.
    • I hope you are a easy going,Patience, understanding and willing to have a curiosity for new things, willing to support each other with your partner, Please contact me, I'm still looking for you and look forward to your presence

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    • After long time travel, I think I should find a place to stay and hope to find a right lady to share each other our life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After a long time travel, I thinkling, I shwould find a place to stay and hope to find athe right lady to share our lives with each other our life.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After a long time traveling, I think I should find a place to stay and hope to find a right lady to share each other ourmy life.
      thiendnguyenthiendnguyen profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I came from Taiwan, first language is Mandarin and Taiwanese, I could speak English, although it is not perfect. so I do not mind where are you came from, or what is your first language.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I caome from Taiwan,. My first language iss are Mandarin and Taiwanese,. I couldan speak English, although it is not perfect., so I do not mind where are you caome from, or what is your first language.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I hope you are a easy going,Patience, understanding and willing to have a curiosity for new things, willing to support each other with your partner, Please contact me, I'm still looking for you and look forward to your presence
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I hope you are a easy going,P patiencet, understanding and willing to have a curiosity for new things, as well as willing to support each other with your partner,.¶¶Please contact me,¶I'm still looking for you and look forward to your presence.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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