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Text from ayisha12 - English

    • IElTS

  • Trips are different.
    • The pupposes are different too.
    • In our chart shows the purposes of visiting foregn countries by different people.
    • Purposes are "business", "holiday", "visit family" and "other".
    • And there are monthes in which investigated the purposes.
    • In March many people went for business- 73 percent.
    • In means that it is the most businees trip time.
    • Only 18 percent people went for holiday.
    • And for visit family went 6 percent.
    • The March is the most business trip month.
    • The next month is June.
    • In June many people went on holiday- 54 percent and only 29 percent for business.
    • It means that it is holiday time.
    • The next month is September.
    • Again many people went for business- 53 percent.
    • September is the beginning of business time.
    • And only 31 percent went on holiday.It is less than in June.
    • The 34 percent people went for business in December.
    • And more people for holiday- 35 percent.
    • This is explained by the fact of Christmas and New Year.
    • And the 26 percent of peole who visited their families explained by the fact of Christmas and New Year too.

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