Korjaukset

Text from NadyaAkinfieva - English

  • Help me with an essay!!!

  • My motherland is the beautiful country, Kazakhstan.
  • This is a great kingdom with a wealthy history, an ancient culture and inimitable nature.
  • The bush of Kazakh land is broad.
  • When in the North is still lying the snow, on a piedmont in the South fruit trees are blossoming.
  • Strong pines of Burabay, golden grain fields of virgin land, grey feather grass of the Great Steppe, the high mountains of Almaty and Tyan-Shan – it’s my Kazakhstan.
  • The views impress me with their unprecedented beauty.
  • I’ll never stop admiring them.
  • Undoubtedly, that is very important to have a political plan for the future.
  • I have heard a president’s speech and I agree with him that the general purpose is creating a society of prosperity based on the powerful government and developed economy and possibilities of universal labor.
  • It’s necessary to have a powerful government to provide condition of speeded economic growth.
  • This means such a government that practices politicking of planning, long-term development and economic increase, that doesn’t practice politicking for survival.
  • Kazakhstan develops according to an approach: “First – economy, later – politics.” Each stage of political reforms is linked to a level of economic development; it is put into effect political liberalization sequaciously.
  • This is only way how to renovate a country and do(or make) it able to enter into competition.
  • Kazakhstan became the first country in (?) Commonwealth of Independent States, which has externalized the modern model of market system based on private ownership, free rivalry and principles of exposure.
  • This model is based on active role of government in engaging(attraction) of foreign investments.
  • In Kazakhstan modeled (formed) backbone(base) conditions for entreneurial business and modern fiscal system (levy machinery).
  • In Republic are attracted of 160 milliard dollars of foreign capital expenditures.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
  • Lause 2
  • Lause 3
  • Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • Strong pines of Burabay, golden grain fields of virgin land, grey feather grass of the Great Steppe, the high mountains of Almaty and Tyan-Shan – it’s my Kazakhstan.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
  • Lause 6
  • Lause 7
  • Lause 8
  • Lause 9
    • I have heard a president’s speech and I agree with him that the general purpose is creating a society of prosperity based on the powerful government and developed economy and possibilities of universal labor.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 9
  • Lause 10
  • Lause 11
    • This means such a government that practices politicking of planning, long-term development and economic increase, that doesn’t practice politicking for survival.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 11
  • Lause 12
    • Kazakhstan develops according to an approach: “First – economy, later – politics.” Each stage of political reforms is linked to a level of economic development; it is put into effect political liberalization sequaciously.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 12
  • Lause 13
  • Lause 14
    • Kazakhstan became the first country in (?) Commonwealth of Independent States, which has externalized the modern model of market system based on private ownership, free rivalry and principles of exposure.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 14
  • Lause 15
  • Lause 16
    • In Kazakhstan modeled (formed) backbone(base) conditions for entreneurial business and modern fiscal system (levy machinery).
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 16
  • Lause 17