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Tekst van AngelaZZ - English

  • A Mistake

  • I was totally shocked when Jane gave me her favorite book, which made me become more anxious than ever.
  • Although we are close, she would never lend me her books before-she thought I would damage her books remissly.
  • Nevertheless, it’s not the only unusual thing that she has done to me.
  • She has acted strangely for several days.
  • It started from the day that we watched the famous movie “Brokeback Mountain” together.
  • After watching it, she asked about my attitude towards homosexuality.
  • “People have the rights to choose their true love, and I would not discriminate against gays,” answered I.
  • “Will you accept me if I have a crush on you?” she asked in a whisper.
  • “What?” I was completely confused and surprised.
  • “Just kidding.” we said nothing after that.
  • There were an awkward long silence between us at the rest of time.
  • In the next morning, I was waken by a strange voice, and when I opened my eyes, I was horrified!
  • She was sitting beside my bed, watching me attentively and whispering!
  • “What are you doing?” cried I. “Watching you.
  • What a lovely girl you are!” she replied in a exaggerate tone.
  • In the following days, she became even nicer than ever.
  • She shared her favorite food with me, invited me to watch movies with her, and even asked me to sleep with her!
  • Why did she treat me in such an overenthusiastic way?
  • Could it be true that she fell in love with me?
  • If it is, what should I do?
  • I was full of doubt and worry.
  • At last, I determined to ask her the reason.
  • “Because I love you.” she answered with a smile. Gosh!
    • She do had a crush on me!
  • My mind went blank suddenly, I haven't thought about dating with a girl.
  • “I’m sorry, I…” I haltingly said.
  • “No, no, I’m the one who should say sorry,” she interrupted me.
  • “I love you, and I’m really sorry for breaking your MP4 after watching the movie.” What a huge mistake I’ve made!

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