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  • October 17th.

  • Today is thursday, October 17th.
    • I don't know why? but I feel so so so red, I don't know what I did ate and I feel so bad, I don't know what thing I'm allergic?.
    • My mommy said to me: you are red like a tomate, jjiji, I'm laughing, because, when I eat something spicy, my face change the color, not green like hulk if not like red like tomate.
    • I don't like think that bite a bug, well, changing the topic, I must thing what I do in october 31st, I like give candies, globes and disguese oneself, but I need new ideas.

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    • I don't know why? but I feel so so so red, I don't know what I did ate and I feel so bad, I don't know what thing I'm allergic?.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I don't know why? but I feel so so so red, I don't know what I did i eate and I feel so bad, I don't know what kind of thing I'm allergic?.
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    • My mommy said to me: you are red like a tomate, jjiji, I'm laughing, because, when I eat something spicy, my face change the color, not green like hulk if not like red like tomate.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • My mommy said to me: you are red like a tomate, jjiji, I'm laughing, because, when I eat something spicy, my face change the color, not green like hulk if not like mean red like a tomateo.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
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    • I don't like think that bite a bug, well, changing the topic, I must thing what I do in october 31st, I like give candies, globes and disguese oneself, but I need new ideas.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I don't like think thaabout bite a bug, well, changing the topic, I must thingk what Iwill i do in october 31st, I like give candies, globes and disgueise onemyself, but I need new ideas. ¶
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