Text from vaness182 - English
October 15th.
- Today is Tuesday, October 15th.
- The last monday, my class had chosen me like the new class president, but It was difficult, because, I've won in the second round.
- During the vote, the candidates (between those myself) we were going to head toward stadium but just only we went to the coliseum while everybody voted.
- Well, now we are going to leave the schoolroom, because the next weekend will be starting the renewal of the building of us.
- At the 2 o'clock I got to the store, but my mommy not stayed here, then I got up the my room to leave my backpack and take a lunch.
- But I forgot close the gateway and when my mommy returned home, scolded to me.
- After, We did a coconut cake.
- Now, I'm improve my english, but I need a teacher to talk talk and talk.
- vaness182October 2013Stem nou!
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