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  • A movie review（Now you see me）.

  • I am a fan of Jeese Eisenberg.I like him because he plays the role in The Socia Network.His performance is awesome!In fact, this movie I saw it again and again because of Aaron Sorkin.I suddenly fall in love with Jesse Eisen berg when I saw it the third time.
  • And his new movie Now you see me (its release date in China is 10 October 2013).I think it is a wonderful movie.
    • This is a story about magic.They just like Robin Hoods.They steal money from the rich and give it to the poor.And also when you finished the whole movie you will find it is a stroy about reveng.
  • There is a little pity.The movie starts with a gorgeous beginning but ends with a tacky(I don't know if the word is appropriate) ending.Because this ending maybe will let audience feel unexpected but not surprise.

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    • I am a fan of Jeese Eisenberg.I like him because he plays the role in The Socia Network.His performance is awesome!In fact, this movie I saw it again and again because of Aaron Sorkin.I suddenly fall in love with Jesse Eisen berg when I saw it the third time.
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    • And his new movie Now you see me (its release date in China is 10 October 2013).I think it is a wonderful movie.
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    • This is a story about magic.They just like Robin Hoods.They steal money from the rich and give it to the poor.And also when you finished the whole movie you will find it is a stroy about reveng.
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    • This is a story about magic. They (The protagonists), just like Robin Hoods.They, steal money from the rich and give it to the poor. And also when you finished the whole movie you will fiunderstand it is a stroy about revenge too.
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    • There is a little pity.The movie starts with a gorgeous beginning but ends with a tacky(I don't know if the word is appropriate) ending.Because this ending maybe will let audience feel unexpected but not surprise.
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