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Мәтін алынған ... - English

  • A movie review（Now you see me）.

  • I am a fan of Jeese Eisenberg.I like him because he plays the role in The Socia Network.His performance is awesome!In fact, this movie I saw it again and again because of Aaron Sorkin.I suddenly fall in love with Jesse Eisen berg when I saw it the third time.
  • And his new movie Now you see me (its release date in China is 10 October 2013).I think it is a wonderful movie.
    • This is a story about magic.They just like Robin Hoods.They steal money from the rich and give it to the poor.And also when you finished the whole movie you will find it is a stroy about reveng.
  • There is a little pity.The movie starts with a gorgeous beginning but ends with a tacky(I don't know if the word is appropriate) ending.Because this ending maybe will let audience feel unexpected but not surprise.

Әр сөйлемді дұрыстауға көмектесіңізші - English

  • Тақырыбы
  • Сөйлем 1
    • I am a fan of Jeese Eisenberg.I like him because he plays the role in The Socia Network.His performance is awesome!In fact, this movie I saw it again and again because of Aaron Sorkin.I suddenly fall in love with Jesse Eisen berg when I saw it the third time.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1
  • Сөйлем 2
  • Сөйлем 3
  • Сөйлем 4
    • There is a little pity.The movie starts with a gorgeous beginning but ends with a tacky(I don't know if the word is appropriate) ending.Because this ending maybe will let audience feel unexpected but not surprise.
      Қазір дауыс бер!
    • Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 4