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  • Disproportionate Force

  • Today I'd like to write about disproportionate force inflicted to the public by Police.
  • After reading and watching police brutality against innocent people recently, that 's their only guilt was to walk by or watch a demonstration, made me think that just because police have a difficult job or have authorization, do they have a privilige like beating anyone up as they consider suspicious.
  • As long as demonstration contains violence, I believe so many people justify police's action in the case but I think this perception is wrong.
  • Because no matter what happens police have no right to harm people except extreme cases like shoot-out or so.
  • Worst of all just because some justify or ignore their actions, they think it's their right to use force in every single case and make habit out of it.
  • Finally, people who think that police also protect themselves by doing so should not forget that police have enough eqipment to protect themselves compare to the people who throw stones or shout.

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  • câu 2
    • After reading and watching police brutality against innocent people recently, that 's their only guilt was to walk by or watch a demonstration, made me think that just because police have a difficult job or have authorization, do they have a privilige like beating anyone up as they consider suspicious.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • As long as demonstration contains violence, I believe so many people justify police's action in the case but I think this perception is wrong.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Because no matter what happens police have no right to harm people except extreme cases like shoot-out or so.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Worst of all just because some justify or ignore their actions, they think it's their right to use force in every single case and make habit out of it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Finally, people who think that police also protect themselves by doing so should not forget that police have enough eqipment to protect themselves compare to the people who throw stones or shout.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6